Questions about debate

 What did you do well? 

        I think i have speak loud and slow enough so that everyone can hear me.

What could you improve?

        I could improve by speak more clearly.

Whose speech did you enjoy the most?  Why?
        I think Mickey speech is I enjoy the most. Because he speak very slowly, clearly and loudly.


What speech did you enjoy the most?  Why?
        I like the sane group, because the show a lot of details about evidence and claim.


What did you enjoy about debate?
        I think that doing debate is very hepful, enjoyful and make us learn a lot of lesson from the debate.      For Ex: It make us know don't be afraid to tell your opinion.


What did you dislike?
         I dislike about  the show. People think that they are not in the real debate so they don't give the best effort in this debate.

Personal narrative

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cXNBg6VqwgW82Or9gigqGD8Z_XqkrwkfY9iymhv6Rlw/edit

Writing Reflection #4

 What did you do well?  How can you improve?
I did well on my grammar and dialogue. But I need to improve add more details in it. Tell more about it. 

Blog Assignment # 3: Reflection on Peer Review

Today you and your classmates viewed each others personal narratives.  Your classmates gave you a lot of advice today(hopefully).  What advice do you think is the most helpful to you?  Why? What did you learn by reading the other students' work? 


I think the advice that my friends gave to me is add more dialogue. Because it will make your story longer and interesting for the people that reading your book. I learn a lot of things by reading other students work, such as we will have more interesting sentence to write and the way that they write it. 

Blog Assignment #2 Writing Reflection

Look at your test drive(personal narrative writing from last week).  Tell me what you think you did well.  How can you improve the next time you write a personal narrative?  Was you personal narrative interesting?  Why or why not?  What grammar errors did you make and how will you correct them in the future?


I think I did well is I have a lot of ideas and I have use past tense. I have to improve is I have to tell more detail about something I write about. I think my personal narrative not very interesting, because i didn't tell a lot of detail about the topic that I writing about. I think the mistake that i have is to tell more about the topic. In the future, I will try to tell more detail. 

LA Question

I think i very confident, speak clearly and easy to hear. I need to improve is tell more detail. My advice for class is you guys need to tell more detail.



I have read The Eagle Of The Ninth over my summer. it a very good book. Because in the book they talk about the fighting of the Roman, but one thing i din't like the book is that they don't have a lot of picture, it will make the guess get bored

  The book that i choose to read is Diary of a wimpy kid. I think kid like grade 4 or 5 would enjoy it. Because it is a funny and hilarious book. I think like old people wouldn't enjoy it. Because they don't like funny book or hilarious. They just like to read something that really serious.