Today you and your classmates viewed each others personal narratives. Your classmates gave you a lot of advice today(hopefully). What advice do you think is the most helpful to you? Why? What did you learn by reading the other students' work?
I think the advice that my friends gave to me is add more dialogue. Because it will make your story longer and interesting for the people that reading your book. I learn a lot of things by reading other students work, such as we will have more interesting sentence to write and the way that they write it.
Great! Take those ideas from the other writer's and use it to make YOUR story better.
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