Wednesday, November 2, 2011

Personal narrative

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cXNBg6VqwgW82Or9gigqGD8Z_XqkrwkfY9iymhv6Rlw/edit
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 5, 2011 at 6:18 PM

    I think your personal narrative was pefect, but, I think you need to put more wordf and a topic.
    -By Daily

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  2. stevehoang24November 8, 2011 at 2:32 AM

    i can not read your personal narrative.

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  3. phamtiendatNovember 8, 2011 at 5:06 AM

    They can improve their work by correct the grammar mistake.
    They wrote a very good story and they had good idea.
    My favorite part is the last part the story.

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  4. Nguyen Hoang Bao ChauNovember 12, 2011 at 2:26 AM

    i think your story it good if you need more topic i think it excellent.

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