Germany acts like acts like red devil.
But they still take up to the next level.
That’s why they have enough power.
Other countries are devoured.
Then they created new weapon.
So with that machine they started to threatened.
Europe is in a panic.
German’s supplies like going to a picnic.
Lusitania sinking, sinking,sinking.
So that starts the American thinking.
The answer is join the war.
Lusitania get a big scar.
After Russia quit.
German wanted to alive.
So they need to fight England before the U.S arrived.
But it was to late.
The America has come too ate.
So the German leader quit his place.
The U.S has won the race.
The world war 1 finally ends.
Other country makes friends.
The world has finally peace.
They can rest for 1 day at least.
In the Ottoman empire .
The war is like fire.
Gun, bullet, and dead body everywhere.
A bloody jacket to wear.
So that the story.
If you don’t like it so I’m sorry.
But they still take up to the next level.
That’s why they have enough power.
Other countries are devoured.
Then they created new weapon.
So with that machine they started to threatened.
Europe is in a panic.
German’s supplies like going to a picnic.
Lusitania sinking, sinking,sinking.
So that starts the American thinking.
The answer is join the war.
Lusitania get a big scar.
After Russia quit.
German wanted to alive.
So they need to fight England before the U.S arrived.
But it was to late.
The America has come too ate.
So the German leader quit his place.
The U.S has won the race.
The world war 1 finally ends.
Other country makes friends.
The world has finally peace.
They can rest for 1 day at least.
In the Ottoman empire .
The war is like fire.
Gun, bullet, and dead body everywhere.
A bloody jacket to wear.
So that the story.
If you don’t like it so I’m sorry.
I really like what you did at the end of your song's script!
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ReplyDeleteSo that the story.
If you don't like it so I'm sorry.
You use a lot of figurative language so is why i like your Poem.
i think you need aliteration
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